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The unholy Battle (William potter)
Title: The unholy Battle
Author: William potter
Language: english
Genre: Modern
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02.12.2012 17:47 - cheeky

I liked this idea, make sure you continue to write it
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08.11.2011 01:47 - Irate Steve

For a game with so few sections (so far) this is really quite good. Though the combat is a little tedious, I feel as though there are a lot of different ways of going about it, and probably some room for strategy later on.

My only real complaint would be that the writing is a bit lacklustre (there's virtually no description), and could definitely do with proofreading. The comment at the beginning that "this wasn't your first choice, but you didn't want to be a bin man" was a nice touch, though. Little details like that really help set the scene.
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